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a writer's journal
Monday, December 31,
2007
The female character in the novel has come
alive to some extent, alive enough to get the writing of her sections
started. I have faith that she'll flesh-out and round-out now in the
writing. She needs a name, too. And I'd like to work out the parallels and
contrasts between her and my (also-un-named) Civil War soldier. I really
like how the possibilities are opening up.
I'm tempted to do a writing-year-in-review thing at
this point--it is the last day of the year, after all--and 2007 has been a
banner year. But the journal and archive are right here for anyone
interested. So maybe a recap is superfluous.
Tuesday, December 18,
2007
Last Thursday I read at the
Carnegie Center
in Lexington, KY. Afterwards I led a workshop on point-of-view in
fiction. There were a dozen very talented and enthusiastic writers in the
workshop. The evening was meaningful, too, because the reading was in the
Carnegie Center room where I'd first studied with Silas House six years
ago. Leatha Kendrick, Rachel Noble, and Jennifer Mattox made it a most
enjoyable evening all around.
I've been reading everything I can find about
the Shaker communities of South Union and Pleasant Hill, Kentucky,
particularly in the 1840-1860's, this as background for the
novel-in-progress. A writer-friend, who worked at South
Union and has done extensive research on that community, has offered to
share what she's learned over the years with me. I count myself extremely
fortunate.
Tuesday, December 4,
2007
A press release issued today by the National
Endowment for the Arts breaks the news, so now I can be a bit more
forthcoming about the very good news mention in November 15th journal
entry. That day an NEA representative phoned to tell me that I'd been
awarded a
2008 Literature Fellowship in Prose. Now I can be more openly thrilled
and humbled...both of which I truly am.
Friday, November 30,
2007
The reading in St. Louis (River
Styx at Duff's Reading Series) went well, with many interesting and
fun people there, including the editors from literary magazines
Crab Orchard
Review and
Sou'wester. Reading with me was talented young poet Adrian Matejka. I
read a complete story for a change, "Stainless," from TKTLB.
I'm thinking I'll read that again at Carnegie Center in Lexington next
month, along with two very short pieces.
I read this quote from Matthew Sharpe the
other day, and I've been thinking about in relative to the
novel-in-progress, H&H. Here's what Sharpe said:
"One of the ways that narratologists think
about stories is that has to be some violation of the social norm to get
the story going. I was walking down the street when such and such
happened. I think one of the ways to understand something about whatever
phenomenon you're investigating is to imagine an extreme case of it,
something that pushes the limits."
I may have been trying to ease into the novel, not going into it boldly
enough.
Thursday,
November 15, 2007
Both new stories have been added to the collection. Now we wait while the contest mechanism grinds.
This afternoon there was very good news from another
direction. For now, that’s all I can say.
Wednesday, October 17, 2007
Once again, I’m surprised by a friend’s email: my story,
“The Accomplished Son,” which was published by The Potomac Review
last year, was cited as a distinguished runner-up in the new
Best American Mystery Stories 2007
edited by Carl Hiassen. I hadn’t
thought of that story as a mystery. Maybe…
I’m working on another story for the collection.
“Overburden,” combines a couple themes. Like most of my stories, it’s
centered on a relationship, a husband and wife. On the surface, there is
less conflict than usual, so I’ll be interested to see and hear reactions.
The risk is that the lack of overt tension means the story will go slack
and readers will lose interest. We shall see.
Friday, September 7, 2007
I have a new story, “Angel, His Rabbit and Kyle McKell,”
rounding into shape. I’ve sent the draft along to the small press and
University Press of Kentucky. It seems like a good story to add to the end
of my too-short short story collection. I’ve waggled between Tether
and Nothing Like an Ocean as a title for the collection.
NLAO is the title of the lead story, which appeared last spring
in Shenandoah. Once I’ve given Angel, His Rabbit, etc.
edits and polishing, I’ll send it to a few literary magazines. It seems
like forever since I’ve shopped a story.
Video from my TV segment in Maryland last spring is up on
the internet now. The interview runs eight or nine minutes. Here’s a
LINK.
Tuesday, August 28, 2007
I’ve been recommending the University of North Texas
Katherine Anne Porter Competition (short story collection) to friends, and
two or three have entered. About two weeks ago I realized that the
manuscript size required to enter is slight—100-200 manuscript pages—and I
might be able to put together an entry myself. I did, in fact, 119 pages. It’ll probably need two or three more stories to
fill it out to standard, publishable size.
Pleasant surprise this week. An online friend e-mailed to
say that the new
Best American Short Stories 2007
(edited by Stephen King) cites my
story, First Husband, First Wife as being among the
distinguished also-rans in the back of the book. That story has been good
to me.
Thursday, July 19, 2007
H&H
is bogging down again. I’m wondering if maybe I’m trying to be too fancy
with the three timeframes in a single novel. On one level, it seems as
though it might work. But then some mornings all I can think is: “Who are
you kidding?” The connections between sections seem too tenuous.
Here’s a Charles Baxter quote that I read recently. It
comes from an interview by Lila Wallace:
“It
can be worrisome if all the people you talk to who say they want to be
writers also say, ‘I don’t read.’ That’s like saying, ‘I want to be an
electrician, but I don’t know much about wires.’
“There’s a certain stage of writing that comes out of self-involvement and
narcissism. And if you’re going to become serious as a writer at all, you
have to get beyond that, so that you are concentrating less on yourself
and on the story and more on the writing itself. You simply have to move
yourself out of the way. Even if you’re writing a memoir. You have to
think at least as much about the language as you’re thinking about your
own history. You have to think about the way in which the story is being
told.”
When I critiqued manuscripts in workshops last year, I’d go
straight to the writing, skipping the content of a writer’s story
entirely. And often it was the content that the person wanted to
discuss…the terrible things that happened to a character, or the dilemmas
faced and the directions taken. How it was written seemed to be regarded
as secondary, and nothing could be further from the truth than that.
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